Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 2, 2019
2.8.19 Persuasive writing
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post

Hi Bianca, I really like that you've chosen to help the animals, it's such a great cause.
ReplyDeleteThe blue background and red text have really made it stand out. You've also used persuasion through the 20% off deal which is clever.
Next time to make it more personal, you could maybe use the names of the animals in the advertisement.
Overall Great Job!
Thank you so much for your advice Miss Gloag
Deletehello bianca it you friend Charlise. Thank you for that information it was very handy. I would like to know how do people hate animals so much
ReplyDeleteokay bye for now
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Hello Bianca I love furry friend as well
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