Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, November 4, 2019
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Hi Bianca, I really your post and we have a lot in common in fact I love horse too, but I think you should add a little more detail about your structure writing because you to describe about the things you like;like what is your favorite horse breed, what is your favorite type of candy. like that type of stuff. Anyway I really like you Google Drawing and I like how it's really colorful great job and have a good day.
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