Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 13, 2020
My own planet
This week we have been making up are own planet in literacy my planet. mine is called Planimal it is the 70th planet from the sun.My planet has so many animals that its hard to count. My planet is made of plants its temperature is usually 22 degrees. There are fresh water streams for the animals to drink from and food for all animals. There are animals that don't live on earth that live there.It would take you 40 years to get there it was discovered by me in 2020.It is one of the most beautiful planets in our solar system and if you can handle forty years in a space ship you should go to Planimal.
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