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Wednesday, June 30, 2021

A Piece of My Writing

 Today before we started with our literacy work, we did some writing. We could write about anything and could find pictures to help us write. I started a story and hope to keep going with it. I hope that you can take the time to read through it. 

Here is my story:

The sky was dark, black clouds raced around. A storm was coming fast. There was no sign of the three missing kids. Rescue teams had been searching the forest for two days and everyone was losing hope.


The children had gone camping with their parents. The parents were shocked when they woke up to find that their three beloved children were nowhere to be seen. Then twenty-four hours later rescue teams were scanning the area.


Its just a small piece that I want to continue with. I think that I did really well, but maybe could have made some of my sentences longer. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my blog.

 

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